“well hi, name my is [Name}, you are absolutely beautiful . I am 30, going back to school for Networking Administration, adding to my 4 year degree public health degree, I graduated from [College] in [City}, in 2007 working at [Place] and [Place] at the moment, and i own my own townhouse in [City], i would love to chat with you and learn more about you 🙂
things i like, star trek, cuddling, pizza, computers.
what about you?
i hope to hear from you
[Name]”
When your FIRST form letter doesn’t get a response.. Wait a few days and send the new and improved, EXTENDED version (my favorite parts are underlined):
“Well hi, My name is [Name], you are absolutely beautiful . I am 30, going back to school for Networking Administration about half done, adding to my 4 year public health degree, I graduated from [College] in [City] in 2007 working at [Place] and [Totally Different Place Than Last Form Letter] at the moment, and i own my own townhouse in [City], i would love to chat with you and learn more about you 🙂
things i like, star trek, cuddling, pizza, computers, intelligent conversation
i am not looking for a one night thing, unlike it seems most guys out there, i never enjoyed that, nor have i ever done that. i am trying to overcome the large stigma of online dating “guys”… so i am being open and honest. I am interested in your heart and your mind. Those are the things that matter…
tell me more about yourself, i am a chatterbug and love a good stimulating conversation 🙂 try me 🙂
a little more about me 🙂
I was born an extreme premature, 24 week… i was 1.3 pounds. 1% survival chance, eye and lunch damage due to the high O2 environment of the forced respiration. Got my name in the NICU neonatal intensive care unit, the nurses called me [Name plus biblical story], thus i always had [animals] as a baby, stuffed animals and such. in and out of the hospital for about 3 years. started kindergarten at 6 instead of 5. i am an only child… grew up in [cities listed] area. my mom and dad got divorced when i was about 3. graduated from high school in 2003. then when to [College] in [city], from 2003-2007. dated emily for almost 2 years. graduated with a public health degree in dec 2007. lived at home after college, started dating holly from late 2008 to mid 2012…. bought my townhouse in [city] for $37,500 in late 2011. started dating sarah from late 2012 to march 2014… started back to school for networking administration in january 2014… now starting my second semester, very excited, loving school 🙂
so thats me in VERY small nutshell (that’s what she said?) 🙂 i hope that wasnt too long lol and that it was somewhat interesting to read
i hope to hear from you
[Name]”
Underlined is what I consider far too much information. Why would you give your dating history in a “first” message?! And that is allegedly only a small nugget of information? I’m already bored and we haven’t gone out!
..He did get a good deal on his town home though..
Soon2BeCatLady 
That’s really crazy!
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Uhhhhmmmm…. Why. Just why. At least he pretty much warns any woman who messages him back that she will be included in the future list of women he’s dated. Please oh please let him send a third and even longer one.
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Wow that’s, um…prolific. Poor dude. So misguided.
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Sorry that guy made us all look bad
Have faith there are still a few of us good ones left 😉
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I have done a lot of online dating in the past and I love reading your stories. My online dating stories were the source of entertainment for my friends, family, and coworkers. I loved getting multiple blast emails from the same guy. 🙂
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